Singing a remake of Umbrella that I wrote..?

Please tell me how you think the lyrics are and I guess how I sound. Im not use to singing in this key, but i created some nice keyboard chords to accompany the song. Im not playing the keyboard in the video b/c I recorded this using my phone. Please comment on youtube if u have one. a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wa_2AY2o-WQ" rel="nofollow"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wa_2AY2o-…/a